Looking For Feedback!

[DSX93]

...On my guy

I intend to make the most of use of him out of all my characters, but I've noticed that his appeal isn't on par with that endeavor, general preference for FvF aside. So I wanted to ask you guys for suggestions on how I could make him a more attractive character to RP with. Not just for matches, but storylines as well.

As usual, you can reach me either here on the site (either in DM's or replies to this topic), or on Discord! My username is the same on both. Much appreciated!

[Harem Girl]

Hey, so never one to turn her back on someone asking for feedback, I am your friendly neighborhood harem girl, here to tell you everything you are doing wrong and why you are a horrible RPer, but phrase it in a constructive way so I can feel good about myself afterwards! Sounds awesome right?

Jokes aside, I relooked over Serivin's character sheet, and honestly it is really well done. A LOT of content, but most of it is hidden in spoiler tags so it isn't overwhelming. With that in mind, there isn't a lot you can do on that front to make him more appealing, other than go crazy on the coding for him.

I think the problem you are having is less with the character itself, and more the nature of the site. As you mentioned in your post, most people are interested in FVF when they come to the site, and even the MVF matches like focusing more on the female characters rather than the male. In my experience, if you are having a male involved with a match, it's mainly either to job to a seductive domineering heel, or (and much more likely) to completely squash and destroy females in ways that would only turn phychos on. (Like myself. :p) When I think of the the more popular male wrestlers on the site, (Killer King, Lycan, Ivan,) all of them meet this latter role.

As such, I think the only real thing that can be done to make him more popular is to turn him into a more dominant wrestler. Maybe not turn him heel, but make him more of a nightmare for women who are facing him. Best way to do that I think is to give him some squash matches, and once he is established as a hard-core wrestler, then start fleshing out his character more with CD topics.

I think we were talking about possibly setting up a match with my Olivia, (sorry I'm getting dozens of RP request and trying to keep it all straight in my head is getting hard, along with keeping up with my other post and my creating ideas new characters) but I think that match, or against a few other jobers, might help alot.

These are just my thoughts while I'm in a doctor's office though, and more experienced LAW RPers might have different thoughts and opinions. So feel free to fish around for other ideas as well. <3

[MR. Q]

Huh? Didn't know Ivan's famous.

As for the feedback, I agree with Harem girl, the site's much FvF oriented than MvF. But if you find some good RP partners, you can probably lift him off.

[DSX93]

Ah. So I made exactly the wrong decision in making him a sensual type, lol. I had the feeling that might have been the case.

The problem here is that the characterization I do have for him thus far has him leaning pretty solidly as a nicer dude. I'm not sure how to go about undoing that without turning him into a heel.

[Ichi]

Ah. So I made exactly the wrong decision in making him a sensual type, lol. I had the feeling that might have been the case.

The problem here is that the characterization I do have for him thus far has him leaning pretty solidly as a nicer dude. I'm not sure how to go about undoing that without turning him into a heel.

I mean, if I thought about it some, I could probably come up with a potential way to get Severin to snap (to some extent) and become less of a "nicer dude", in such a way that could be sufficiently justifiable in this RP space from a narrative perspective.

So, if you'd like, I could help you brainstorm.

[Ichi]

So I wanted to ask you guys for suggestions on how I could make him a more attractive character to RP with.

Simply put, just make him a woman. Problem solved.

(IMPORTANT NOTE: I'm hoping that we know each other well enough for the sardonic joke I just made to not be interpreted as being a serious suggestion. However, if my words came across poorly, I apologize for that and would be perfectly willing to remove the shitty joke upon request. Joking intent neither mitigates nor justifies harm or offense.)

[DSX93]

Simply put, just make him a woman. Problem solved.

That's a given, lol. But nah.

No offense taken, by the way!