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Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2018 6:48 pm
by Luncha_Libre
anime_hentaifighter wrote: ↑Wed Sep 12, 2018 7:49 pm
Like your characters to be honest , but can't comment on how they roleplay since i have not really done a match with you yet.Can read the stories , but most times a character acts a way because of how both roleplayers planed it .Hope we can do that match soon
Thank you, tho! I've really been wanting to do something with you, too! I'll PM you soon, maybe we can finally work that out!
winner3 wrote: ↑Wed Sep 12, 2018 8:39 pm
So I'm not well-versed in telling folks how they can improve their writing overall, but I will try to oblige in regards to the specific requests you made and questions you've asked.
I haven't done many threads with you but from what little we've done, I think your character selling is some of the best I've seen or worked with […] I've enjoyed your descriptions of the wear and moves your own characters have suffered through and what they're fighting/going through while trying to mount offense of their own. I've enjoyed reading British Bombshell matches and the only feedback I'd give is to maybe have them attempt to do more so that they look more like they're trying, or explain how they couldn't act in certain circumstances/posts when possible. I love them as sympathetic faces. I just personally wanna see them go for more moves/try to fight back more often. Even if it were to all get countered, I as a reader have the satisfaction of knowing that effort was made before they got ragdolled […]
That is all such excellent feedback, thank you so much! Really lets me know what I’m doing right, which I very much appreciate, and gives me some great pointers! You gave me something that I hadn’t thought about much, with regards to characters pushing back even if they're destined to fail, and I can definitely see where you’re coming from. Thank you so much for that feedback, it’s definitely something I’ll be keeping in mind for future threads. Both Bombshell threads, and for my other characters! Again, thank you so much!
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2018 8:32 pm
by anime_hentaifighter
Luncha_Libre wrote: ↑Mon Sep 17, 2018 6:48 pm
anime_hentaifighter wrote: ↑Wed Sep 12, 2018 7:49 pm
Like your characters to be honest , but can't comment on how they roleplay since i have not really done a match with you yet.Can read the stories , but most times a character acts a way because of how both roleplayers planed it .Hope we can do that match soon
Thank you, tho! I've really been wanting to do something with you, too! I'll PM you soon, maybe we can finally work that out!
Glad to hear it
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Wed Sep 19, 2018 9:26 pm
by Satoshi
Alright, hit me where it hurts (actually hit me where it moderately hurts... (actually... just you know what to do))
In all seriousness (not) let me hear how much of a terrible roleplayer I am.
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2018 11:15 pm
by Satoshi
Come on, what are you waiting for?
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2018 7:48 pm
by anime_hentaifighter
Well your an amazing roleplayer , got a sense of humor , and easy to get along with. Can't think of something bad to say through besides you forgetting a thread at a time
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2018 11:46 pm
by Satoshi
Yeah, that does happen sometimes to be honest. But thanks for the compliments.
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 4:58 am
by winner3
egerke wrote: ↑Wed Sep 19, 2018 9:26 pm
Alright, hit me where it hurts (actually hit me where it moderately hurts... (actually... just you know what to do))
In all seriousness (not) let me hear how much of a terrible roleplayer I am.
[mention]egerke[/mention] I meant to respond to this one a while ago, but I struggled to find the time. While Daddy [mention]LtLukas[/mention] is away, I'll try to fill his shoes!
I'd like to say that I think you have good comprehension wrestling moves and spatial awareness in your matches and that's what I've enjoyed most about rp'ing with you thus far! And I look forward to being able to do more. As far as constructive criticism goes with what I feel could be improved upon or changed, I'd suggest trying to break away from your usual post template/pattern. That's not a slight to you in particular. Most people follow a particular template or style, including myself. Deviating from that might help you come up with more ideas and add to the flow of your matches and rp's
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2018 9:25 am
by anime_hentaifighter
egerke wrote: ↑Mon Sep 24, 2018 11:46 pm
Yeah, that does happen sometimes to be honest. But thanks for the compliments.
It happens to me a lot to be honest
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2020 7:19 am
by Lunaspark
Let's bring this old thread back to life.
I've been making a serious effort to get back into things lately, now that most of my IRL issues have been handled and taken care of. How am I doing in terms of quality and such? People that I'm currently doing threads with, are you enjoying them? Would you do more with me in the future?
Lay it on me, yo.
Re: Constructive criticism
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2020 8:50 am
by anime_hentaifighter
Lunaspark wrote: ↑Sun Oct 04, 2020 7:19 am
Let's bring this old thread back to life.
I've been making a serious effort to get back into things lately, now that most of my IRL issues have been handled and taken care of. How am I doing in terms of quality and such? People that I'm currently doing threads with, are you enjoying them? Would you do more with me in the future?
Lay it on me, yo.
Always willing to roleplay with talented people , and glad you got your irl issues all worked out