Constructive criticism

[Noob]

So idk if there is a thread here already, but im looking for some criticism and I hope I aint the only one. I'd like to start a thread where you can request and give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

As for me, I'm wondering how I'm doing as far as rp style goes and if there's anything I do that's particularly apparent and takes away from rps.

[CyanDimitrik]

Well, this is a problem I've noticed with you and basically everyone else. It's really distracting and breaks the flow of RP a lot. On the other hand, I'm guilty of falling into this, too, so don't feel like I'm coming down on you. It's an easy pitfall. Still, you asked, so here it is.

Hidden for discretion's sake:

It's RL. Stupid RL, ruining our good times. :3

[Noob]

lol you little imp I thought it was something I could fix.

[Dragonofdarkness]

i think your doing an A okay job noob rl get in the way for most people cyan i try not to let it bother me to much but everything you do noob is pretty good i dont see much problems.

I wonder how im doing with my post i know i have alot of grammar mistakes and misspelled words. but i was wonder what else im doing bad at.

[Noob]

I honestly don't notice any grammar mistakes. figured the rare misspelling was just cause of an autocorrect? Only thing is sometimes your posts are a bit on the short side. I'm having fun with the rp we're doing though. Hope I i get back to u soon

[Dragonofdarkness]

yeah when my brain dies i tend to go shorter then i would like to and i type fast so i can mistype alot catching it is hard for me.

and ill be waiting if you have anything you doing like tell ne

[RiotGrrl]

Noob, I don't have any issues with your RP, that's why we do stuff all the time you know all you have to do is PM me.

DarknessDragon, I have seen you write really well with people like RJD who is also really good. You have nothing to worry about. I'm enjoying our current RP also.

Believe me if I didn't like you, what you did or thought we wouldn't gel together, then we wouldn't RP.

[winner3]

IRL stuff gets the better of everyone every now and then lol in a perfect world we could just post whenever without the need to be occupied elsewhere or without ever getting burnt out but we understand when it happens and respect when people might need a little time.

I know it's a bit of a cop out response, but I genuinely enjoy reading the threads of everyone here that commented so far. There no glaring flaws or shortcomings that I feel you guys need to readily address. I've enjoyed and look forward to more rp's with noob, rjd, and riot. And I'd love to thread with dragon or cyan sometime when I'm a little more available and have less threads.

I've definitely got my own problem areas, though. With my posts and rp's in general. Feel free to give me any criticism you think I need to hear. I'd love to improve.

[CyanDimitrik]

Just, um, just in case it wasn't clear!

I was making a funny. A joke.

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I ruv you gais.

[Caboose2.0]

HI GUYS! I WANNA BE CONSTRUCTED! TeLL ME HOW GREAT I AM AND HOW I CAN MAKE MYSELF GREATER!